Oh,nooooooooo. Star illness is not for me. I'm just ordinary, plane girl. But I have written a poem. If you don't object, I'll post it here. Please, say your opinion.
Before the dawn is darkest time
You full your cup with crimson wine
There's no more hope,There's no more fear
Come on, embraсe and kill me,dear!
Your scars and wounds were hilled by me
I gave you heart and lemon tea
and you've decided to forget
that spider caught you in a net
But sun is rising on the sky
and it will burn my past bad life
I've changed day with solemn night
there is no power for the fight.
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My poems are usually very sad. It's a scream of my deep emotions, while I keep smiling.I try to cover them from everybody, but when I write I can't keep them inside. So.........it's ok,it isn't worth be mentioned.
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I was know that you can do some special, but it was exceed all expectations)) I'm very impressed "heard and lemon tea")
but first verse - it's in spirit of you. and I like it most of all
I din't expect such reaction...so.....thank you a lot. In this week-end I will post a new one, to tell the truth it wiil be very optimistic!A new life has begun.
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Why now does write you?
And that will I wish in reply?
Do I love? Will not say such.
In fact about you I do not dream
I didn't understand complitelly. But it impressed me.
Plese, could you post another poems, if you want, it's very interesting
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